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This is an open plea for someone, anyone, to provide a copy editor to certain local news organizations. It's articles like this one that will start grammar teachers spinning on their heads:

A judge ordered that the complex be auctioned after, the Cascades Grandview apartment tower defaulted on a $7.2 million loan…

Because of the market for rental property is stronger and there especially appears to be growing demand in the downtown area. There's might be a potential to do something very positive with the apartment complex…

The city says, no matter who owns the building after the auction, the water $74,000 must be paid. You first learned about the issues at this apartment on WFMY News 2, after the air condition went out in July.

Keep in mind that these are just a couple of the errors found in an eight paragraph piece

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